1 for 2 1 for 4 for the next 3 people!!!

  • BeautifulxMess
    17 years ago

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    New Poem.
    *Before I Fall*
    It's a really sad story about a lost little girl.
    Anyway.
    So yeah next 3 people get 4 poems commented and rated and no you wouldn't get silly one liners.
    But the deal only applies if you follow these rules.
    1.)NO ONE LINERS
    2.)BE HONEST
    3.)RATE MY POEM ALSO
    4.) NO EXPLICIT POEMS!!

    OKay so there you have it let the deal begin :).

  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    I could not find anything lacking

  • Christina
    17 years ago

    Ok i read ur poem

    it was great btw

  • Lonely Rider
    17 years ago

    Ok done...
    very well written..

    please do 'crying in solitude' and 'dawn to dusk'

  • noha
    17 years ago

    Doneeee^_^
    plz do the same for me and rate also
    the day before
    hidden
    adream about you
    i love you so i will let you go
    thanks

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    Done .
    Could you please do :

    `Silence My Lips With Yours
    `Lost in This Verse

    Thanks, m'dear :)
    ..__ MiNDYY

  • BeautifulxMess
    17 years ago

    Sorry everyone I am late on the
    commenting I will return later and finish.

    <3Thank you everyone who commented
    ya'lls comments were very much appreciated
    and for all you critiques thank you for the help.
    :) I'll take consideration in ya'lls idea's :)

  • BeautifulxMess
    17 years ago

    My first 3 I am done with ya'lls.
    I will do the rest now.
    anyone else for the 1 for 2

    DONE WITH ALL I WILL CONTINUE 1 FOR 2