1 for 1, 1 for 2, 1 for 3 and on and on

  • Anthony Duvalle
    17 years ago

    You do one or more of mine and ill do some of yours

    things to remember:
    1. must be actual critique, no superficial cliches
    2. ill match the amount you do
    3. i may do more than you do if i like your work
    4. remember to leave the poem titles you want me to do as a response to this message or ill just do your newest ones

  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    Could you r/r/c on "To the broken Hearted" while I check out another of your poems

  • Lonely Rider
    17 years ago

    Done.... I read one of your poems and I was impressed.. very well written..

    'Mars - the red planet ' please

    thanxx

  • H E Losey
    17 years ago

    Critiqued a couple. Think you have a bit of talent there even if I am old and not too keen on the suicide theme.
    If you wish please peruse some of my less commented featured writes as they are the newest and as yet unpublished. thank you for the opportunity to read your work.

  • Anthony Duvalle
    17 years ago

    Alright I think I'm caught up on all of em. If not message back here reminding me how many I owe you.

    Any more?