New girl here!

I've written a couple of poems and i just want some advice.. like things i could do to improve.
i will always comment/rate back
thanks!

Hey, I'll check yours out! And welcome to poems and quotes!

Please RRC my latest poem Numbness Controls

I'll rrc (read rate comment) a few of your poems
you are welcome to return the favor towards any
two of my poems that catch your eye

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By the way welcome to P&Q
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