The Art of Drowning [1.For.3]

This is my first poem in a few months. I don't know how I feel about it.. so you tell me.
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RULES:
o1. Enjoy reading it. Actually think about it.
o2. Leave three titles. No love or friendship; the site doesn't allow me to comment them.
o3. Do NOT leave one liners.. or I won't even bother commenting you back. THINK about it.
o4. Vote.

---I leave detailed comments. So. Try to do the same for me.

xxx.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Guys, read the rules.

I appreciate the long comments, but no love poems for me.

I'll do your latest three... maybe in a minute. I have the SATs tomorrow, so I should be sleeping. :/.

Alright.

I'll get started on these most likely tomorrow.
I need to catch up on laundry and take a breather.

So.

Anyone still wanting to?
By all means.

xx.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Done :)

Please comment on:

* My Neptune
* Arcania, the Fallen One
* Movie of Our Life

Thanks in advance.

Ok i'll do it

please return the favor with

-Hell
-Ode to the Teenager
-STOP IT

thanks a ton :~)

Done... -coughs- It's a little long... I might've chattered on, here and there. -hides-

Can you please do Astray? And if you have the time, any other ones would be alright. Thanks a lot!

You owe me a couple comments from a few months ago dear :[

if you want to do them:

dreamer's never leave dreamland
breaking point the final assault
whiskey my water

I have done it.

if you would, this is a new idea. re-read 2 of my old poems and let me know what you think of them today, as to how you felt about them 2 years ago when first you read them.

they are:
mindslaver
why we make collect calls and wear overcoats.

tom

Everyone --

Thanks for being patient. I will do these, but suddenly I'm being kicked out of my house and rearranging shit..
Anyways.

I'll get to these.
Alex D. I will, promise. [the last time i got so caught up in OTHER issues.. life's too full of drama.]

xx.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

------------COMMENT UPDATES--------------------
o1. TSI --
You're finished, doll. I loved the first one, espically. Thanks for your comments. :].

o2. Miss Take --
Done with yours, as well. I loved the third one of yours; very nicely done. Thanks for you time. :].

o3. NyellMoonlight --
A very beautiful job. Watch out scaring the reader with your amazing vocabulary, but I loved it anyways. Thanks for your time. :].

o4. Zeenat --
You're done. I hope the comments were at least a little useful.. and I'm sorry about the passing of your grandmother. Take care. :].

Done. I hope that my comment made some sense!
Please do:

Accident or Murder?
The Dreams She Can't Believe In.
Ocean View.

Thank You :)

Thanks dear

NEXT IN LINE --

o1. Sam Mayo
o2. Krathia
o3. Alex D.
o4. AlaSka
o5. Leap of Faith aka Temps

Just be patient and I'll get to you, ask the other four. :].
I'm doing about two everytime I get on, so. It shouldn't take too long.

xx.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

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