~Fight For What's Right~ ( 1 - 4 )

Pause; A zoom in behind her face

Theres the title I would like constructive critisim also please. I aim to improve =)

Thanks and please leave titles

Alex xxx

Comments owed

Author: Jess
{Done 4}

Author: Nyellmoonlight

* My Neptune {Done}
* Movie of Our Life
* Spellcaster's Judgment
* Haunted Hearts

Author: Colm

* a man spreading weedkiller
* a perfect deception
* a friends help
* treasure

Author: Michael

* Where Did I Go wrong?
* To the Broken Hearted
* Does the mind exist?
* Casting out demons

Author: Rubberduckie

* Let The Pieces Fall Where They May.
* Love Is A Mystery.. Solve It.
* The Dreams She Can't Believe In.
* Ocean View

Author: Ninjagirl

* Rewriting the World [[collab]]
* Dying Shadows Dance
* Imperfection
* Razorblade Games

Done :)

Please comment on:

* My Neptune
* Movie of Our Life
* Spellcaster's Judgment
* Haunted Hearts

Thanks a lot.

Where Did I Go wrong?

To the Broken Hearted

Does the mind exist?

Casting out demons

Let The Pieces Fall Where They May.

Love Is A Mystery.. Solve It.

The Dreams She Can't Believe In.

Ocean View.

Thank You!

Ok, I'm off to work soon so will finish these when I get home or early tommorow. Thank you so much for reading my poem

Alex xxx

Still open by the way keep 'em coming

DONE!! an amazing write from you, i believe.

please do,

"Rewriting the World [[collab]]",

"Dying Shadows Dance",

"Imperfection"

&&

"Razorblade Games"

thank you in advance