Looking For Fresh Eyes, Willing To Return The Favor

I have quite a few poems here...but I haven't been posting for a while now, with the exception of a few new poems. I would very much appreciate someone being a honest, and if necessary, harsh critic, of any of my work. I will definitely return the favor (1 for 1). If you have a request for a specific poem for me to read, leave it here.

Warning - I will be honest, so if you just want a pat on the back, do not ask me to review your work. I'm not mean about it, but I will not lie. If you are looking for creative criticism and ways to improve, then you have found the right person to critique your poetry.

I will, and i will be honest with your work as you with mine.

i do not want creative criticism or ways to improve, i want to know how my words make you feel. what thoughts they provoke and so on.

tom

No problem.

My vote went through.. but some error happened when i tried to send comment. i sent you a PM.

I got it! No worries. And I replied in the PM...but just in case you check this first, all is well. :)

Thank you.

Anyone else?

Hey, I did "False Memories?", nice title by the way.

Please do my latest poem, "Our Loving Savior"

Thanks a bunch!

No problemo, either. I will get right on that. :) Thank you for your comment.