Impress me..

Pick 1 or 2 from the following:

does your button down oxford dream of irons at night?/
mindslaver/
why we make collect calls and wear overcoats/
staccato memories

comment and rate them.
IN YOUR COMMENT: do not talk about punctuation, capitalization, poetic rhetoric.(i could care less). tell me how my poem makes you feel. the thoughts it conveys to you, and how it touched you during and after reading.

FOR YOU: PM me one or two of your works that you feel are impressive. i will comment and vote them. if they are truly impressive, it will go on my page of favorites, and so will you.

disclaimer: do not pm me poems that are trash. cliche poems will receive no answers. i do not give pats on the back. love/friendship/cutting poems fall under cliche.

enjoy.

Commented/rated two of yours: "does your button down oxford dream of irons at night?" and "why we make collect calls and wear overcoats". Great poems.

Please comment/rate:

* Movie of Our Life
* Spellcaster

(they're not cliche)

Staccato memories
was the one that i did
wow i still have goose bumps

- The Last Day

hope your impressed

Is there no one else?

I read mind slaver nice write
well i hope

Numbness controls

is a write you will enjoy.

Very deep
would you do my latest?