Dreams or Reality? [[1-1]]

I just finished a collab with a great friend of mine.

The poem is called;
"Dreams or Reality?"
I'd love honest feedback. No 1-3 liners. :) Thank you.

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Oooh, and please don't forget to leave a specific title if you want a specific poem commented, otherwise state you don't care =)

Done.....

Please do one of my latest, "Cold Words"

Thanks in advance!

Done, very enjoyable read..

Anyone else? :)

Done =]

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