"Dig My Grave" and I'll do two

I know it is cliche, but if you will humor me ill be nice

Pease tell me if you wish pianfully honest, or a gentle critique on two of yours.

Be gentle I am in pain

Painfully honest, I suppose...
I really don't care as long as you critique it so that I may improve on SOMETHiNG in the pieces.

Could you please do :

`Fractured Twilight Librettos
`Midnight Misery

Thank you .
..__MiNDyY

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Plz rrc my latest

To love is to die

you don't have to do two^^

I have written a poem by the name of "Child Begger Noshi"...read it,rate it and let me know what you feel about it
Thanks...and love

It is hauntingly touching