Comments for Comments?

If anyone has a spare moment, I would REALLY appreciate it if you could comment on "My Perfect Dream Of Truth". It's the first time I've tried writting in this particular style of open poetry, and I'd really like to see what everyone thinks of the results.

***I will do my best to return the favour, though I try to comment everyone's poems that I get a chance to read, I'll definitely read through some of your poems, or specific ones if you'd like and comment back. ***

Done!

I'll read yours because it is important to you. You dont have to read any of mine unless you want to.

I'll read yours even if you don't comment :) Like I said, I try to comment people when I come across their poetry, just too many people to get to all of them unless they say "hey! read this!" -grins-

You have gave me several comments and i just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to read them.