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  • Poet on the Piano
    16 years ago

    Hey, please comment and vote on my three latest poems.....I need some feedback on them.......No one-liners, be honest.......I will do the same for you......Thanks!

  • Normal is the Watchword
    16 years ago

    Innocence (story) It's a story scene, so since it's longer that is all I ask and that you please be honest with it.

  • Poet on the Piano
    16 years ago

    Evanescence, done. Great job, it was really amazing.

    Anyone else?

  • H E Losey
    16 years ago

    Done, perhaps not as well as you would like as good as I could.
    Any that are in need of some review, prefer those featured please.

  • Poet on the Piano
    16 years ago

    Okay, I did yours H E Losey, good work.

    Next?

  • SilentSuicide
    16 years ago

    Done :]]

  • Poet on the Piano
    16 years ago

    Silent Suicide, I did three of yours, just random ones I did, hope you don't mind.