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Okay, I've just written a new poem called "Beyond The Realms Of Reality". It was done for a contest. I'd love it if you could give me some honest critique on it. Thank you!

-Rules-
o1. No love -happy- love poems. [I'm just not in the mood ><]
o2. Must be honest, or you will get nothing in return.
o3. Leave titles or I'll pick at random.
o4. Don't do this deal if you're sensitive about your work, because I can be pretty blunt sometimes.

Mkay. That's all. x]

I'm working on something at the moment that I might post today. It's a possible start to the book I might write (about the scene I posted) so maybe read that later for me.

Ooh yay! :]

Hope you're not mad at the comment :( Tried to give some advice.

What was the book that you based it on?

It's okay, I knew there was something I didn't like about it. I think I'm going to work on it more tonight. :]

It's about this girl whose mother died. After that she was sent to this boarding school in London, where she begins to discover these powers where she can go into another realm. When she arrives there she see's her mother, who tells her this.. thing/person is trying to kill her so no one can get into the other realm. It kind of left off in a weird place since it's a part of a series.. I need the next book. :[

Interesting, but must suck to need the next one right lol

I dropped a note. I found the poem enjoyable to read. I also read "Aspired Homicide". If you really wouldn't mind could you could take a look at "Spoiled Omelet" It's a very different poem, but perhaps you might like it...

Yeah, it does. I borrowed it from a friend so now I have to give her the book back and get the next one. Haha.

Empathy- sure. :]

Mkay. Done. :]