New Poem; {{1 for 1}}

New poem;
Title: "Fade."

`NO 1-2 liners, if you give me one.. I won't return the comment.
`Honest feedback.
`Suggestions for improvement on my poem are highly recommended and appreciated.
`Vote.
`Leave title here after you're finished.

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I checked it out. ...I hope I wasn't too harsh, I wasn't trying to be. I just threw out a suggestion or two. I think the poem has great opportunities to branch out to. as any would. :)

If you would please take a look at "Spoiled Omelet"

Nope, it wasn't harsh at all. :]

Done with yours. Lol. Interesting write.

Anyone else? (:

^ you did the wrong one, but it's okay :]

I'll get to yours now.
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Done.

Anyone else??

Done :)

I only have one poem on this site so far, so could you possibly read "Champion of Lies" for me?

Thanks! and very nicely done on the poem.

I'm on it.
Thanks for pointing out to me that my title was too bulky, I have to agree with that, so I changed it.

[Edit]

Donee.

Anyone else?? (: