Constructive Criticism Offered

Want contructive criticism? I'm willing to do just that. Just tell me which poem of yours you want reviewed. (Warning: I'm going to be completely honest, so don't bother replying in here if you only want sugar-coated comments like "wow, you're so talented"... unless of course that's what I think)

Editted to add: I do NOT rate people's poems - whether I hate it or not. I don't believe in the whole rating system this site has, so don't expect me to give you a 5 or anything.

please take a look at my poems....i only have a couple. please be brutially honest

Sure! CAn you read 2 of my poems. Please don't get carried away with the previous comments.

An impious night (2 Rondels).
Happy Anniversary (Rondeau Redouble)

I am not expecting sugar coated comments. i am expecting some comments that can help me improve. Thanks for your time, in advance.

yea i just got all my looked at by another person and he was the doing the same things u r .... and now all my poem ratings have gone down ... which is not a bad thing if they deserve it ... so could u please check out some of mine i just want another honest opinion

Coul you read "The Two Trees" and "the Cure" please thanks!

I'd love constructuve criticism. Happy to get some.

i'd really appreciate if you could do "colorless infinity" i have no comments on it, yet and i wanna know what someone thinks

*ignore*

sure, I could use some constructive critisism. Any of my featured poems would be great. I'm ready for anything you have to say. Thanks

I need some honest view points plz look at my Bloody Valentine

kool read 'truth hurts ' for me plzz

I would really appreciate it if you read "The lie" cause I want to know as much opinions as possible!

All right, I've read and truthfully commented on one or two poems of all of yours. Again, remember, I offered constructive criticism, so if I didn't like your poem, I told you why. If you didn't like my review, tough luck, because I did say I'd be completely honest. I didn't give any of the poems ratings, however, and that's because I think the whole rating system is unecessary.

editted to add: if any of you ever have any spare time, I'd appreciate some constructive criticism as well, for any one of my poems (preferably "Caspian Sea").

There, done another few.

check out mine comment / vote

Done, done, and done.

Anyone else?

Lol, I think this is exactly why I lost an award. So sad. Maybe I should just bullshit like most people.

Please comment on some for my poems..

Done all of yours.. (one or two from each person)

Anyone else?

yes please!

done

I did both. Anyone else?

Seriously? No one else?

I'm talking to myself now.