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Could you please read my poem:

Will you marry me?

its a poem, im planning to read to my gf soon, and i want to know if its good enough, please comment on it as well... and i wud read 1 of ur poem...

and please tell me what is wrong with the poem, so i can fix it... thanks

Done.

Any of my latest please.

Thanks.

Thanks "Leap Of Faith aka Temps"

i will do one of yours now!

i will change infinity to eternity :)

Thanks

Done..Please do Lustful Tempo..Thanks in advance..xDD

Thanks "Zeenat"

i did : A jokers Game

thanks for your comment...

Thanks MauLiCiouSss

i did Lustful Tempo

it was good...

thanks for the comment on mine

Done.<3

that was veryy beautifull!

could you do "In The Mind Of The Suicidal" please =)

thanks.