Two For Four - [BREE aw NUHH]

HEYYYYYY! Two new poems! :D

Read, rate, and comment one or both of them, and I will return the favour times two.

"What Am I Doing?" -- it's for a contest.
&
"Dead Along With Hope And Faith" -- it's a Pantoum. [Mind you, this is my first attempt at this type of poetry]

- No one/two/three liners. I will not accept them. They won't do any good whatsoever. Sorry, but I will NOT return the favour if you leave them.
- Actually VOTE. It's part of the deal. If you don't vote on mine, I won't vote on yours.
- Leave titles, pleaseeeee?

Thanks! <3

Done.
Sorry if I made no sense, I'm still trying to wake up, loll.

"Show Me What Love is Like."
"Deep Dark Hole."
"Let Me Decay Here, Beside My Broken Heart."
"She Awaits her Soulmate."

Thank you.

Done I think i'm going to add you to my favourites I like your work a lot please be honest when looking at mine it helps me become a better poet.
1) Jaded Rose
2) A soft and gentle reminder
3) On they edge of reality
4) Trust in you

Thanks very much
Adele

Temps, done.
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Adele, done.

Anyone else?
:D

Thank you for your comments but you asked for no 1/2/3 liners and yet that is what u left on mine

You left me the same thing. Three lines. You just used "and". :O

**But, I'm commenting again since they didn't suffice.

Done! Excellent work on your poetry! They are beautiful!

Please do any ones you would like.

Thanks sooo soo much!

<3Loni

I will do yours ASAP, Loni.

It may be tonight, but if not, it will be tomorrow afternoon, after school.
:]

Loni, yours are done now. :D

Anyone else?

Hey! i did 3 of your poems!

uhm the 2 mentioned up there and your latest one hehe! i'm really glad i did because they're all AMAZING ! You've got talent girl!

any poems on my featured list would be nice :]

HvN, working on them now.

& I'll do 5 of yours, since you did the two I asked for, and one I didn't ask for.
:]

Soso - I'll get to yours soon.
:]

Soso, done.

Anyone else?

Hiya!

Done. =]

Sorry it took so long! And sorry they werent as long as I was hoping, in a bit of a rush! =]

Hmm...

Just do two (if you want):

- "Where did you go?"
and
- "Love me? [rictameter]"

The "love me" one is my first time doing a rictameter, so it may be a little dodgy =]

Thanking you in advance! And good luck! =]

xx
Nic
xx

P.S. I will praise comments if more than a few (10 or so) lines are used! =]

xx

I will get to them either later tonight, or tomorrow. Just depends.
:]

Np.

Take ur time =]

No rush! =]

xx

Nicole, I've done those two listed. I will do more later on today.

&& Rikki, yours are done, too.

Please do any of my featured work thanx Plot121

Ty Bree =]

Muchly appreciated! =]

And you dont have to do others if you don't wanna.. =]

Once again, thanks! =]

xx

Robert - I'll get to yours asap.

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