I will read, rate & comment on your poems.

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    If any body want me to read their poem, please tell which ones. tell me the names of 1 or 2 poems which you want me to read. I would like to read and comment.

    But please no cutting poems or abuse poems. I can't read those. I am sorry.

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    You have been taken care of. The poems are written really good. Good luck.

  • Scarlette
    20 years ago

    Any one of mine, please, and thank you.

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    I have checked your poem.. Something with capscien sea or something... Er. I am sure i made something wrong. But i will go back. :D

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Scarlette,
    I already had left comments on 2 of your poems “The lovers” and “Caspian sea”. You are good at portraying visual images in your poems.
    I didn’t like that ‘Satan’s prayer’ just because of the title. He hee :D. I read it roughly and didn’t pay much attention to it!
    There was another poem, which was cute and a bit funny (in a good way). A love poem.
    I liked ‘Caspian sea’ and ‘untouched’ the best.

  • Scarlette
    20 years ago

    Thanks. You pointed out an error in Untouched. I fixed it. It was just supposed to be 'become', not 'becomes'. Thanks for pointing that out.

  • WhiSperNcUrsIVe
    20 years ago

    I would love you to read comment and vote my poems...any of them! but mostly the one "untitled"
    Thanks!

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    I read some of your poems. If i have time, i will read more. For now, Bye.

    Sam, Thanks for your kind comments.

  • TrUtH hUrTs
    20 years ago

    could u read 'lost soul' please? and any others if u like?

  • bucky
    20 years ago

    could you please check out my featured poems .... plz

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    I did check your poems.

    Jim, I will do what i can today itself.

    Anybody else?

  • WhiSperNcUrsIVe
    20 years ago

    Yes...could you please check my poems out and comment and vote..thank you...i will check yours out too!

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    :) Done!

  • xeag
    20 years ago

    CHECK MINE OUT .. .

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Done. Anybody else?

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Jim.. i just completed the major surgery for your poem. Hope that my criticism didn't exceed limits. :I

    Anybody else?

  • Austin
    20 years ago

    If you could plz read
    A game of accusations
    and
    screen written apology

  • Kaitlin Kristina
    20 years ago

    Thank you so much Trincy. If you would like to it would be great if you could check out some of mine. The featured ones are the ones I recommend most at this point, however I think all my poetry is at least decent.
    Your so sweet, thank you for helping all of us out.
    Love Kaitlin Kristina

  • happy days
    20 years ago

    please can you comment on any of mine nd ill return the favour

  • Lydia O
    20 years ago

    If your offer is still open, I would appreciate it if you could take a look at Journey on a Desert Train and/or Seafaring Fantasy.

    Thanks, Trincy.

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Oh god! Lots of home work! :@) jk... I will catch up with you guys as soon as possible. I checked few of your poems and i enjoyed it a lot.

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    I guess I finished checking all the requested poems. Let me know if I skipped any. My offer is still open. So please let me know if you want me to read and comment.
    Love,
    Trincy.