"A Fighting Chance" -- [1-for-1] -- BREE aw NUHH

New-ish poem. "A Fighting Chance". Read, rate, and comment it, and I'll return the favour. It's for a contest, by the way. :]

**EDIT:** Added a new one -- "Addicted"

Rules;
01. No one/two/three liners. You'll get NOTHING in return if you leave them.
02. Actually VOTE. It's part of the deal. If you don't vote on mine, I won't vote on yours. Be honest, too.
03. Leave titles. Don't say "My latest", unless that's the title of your poem. It annoys me. :[

Thanks. <3

Anyoneeeee?
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Thanks. I'll get to it later tonight or in the morning.
=]

Zeenat -- done.

Rikki -- done.

Anyone else? =]

Your poems are always amazing.

I did both of them. I hope the comments are too short, :|

My two latest please. Thank you :]

I'll get to them this afternoon, or once I return home this evening.

Done. Can you do "Eternal Relief" (which is my latest)? Thanks

Done!

Sorry it was rushed! :s

Ill make it up to you again later! :D:D

Hmm...

"Sixty-One" please :)

Although, note that its about my Grandad, and he was a painter.. which is why you may/may not get the last line. :)

Thanks in advance Bree!

xx

Done!
Please comment and vote for my latest poem:
"For a Friendship to Remain"

Thanks and have a pleasant read :)

:O

Thanks, all. I'll get to a fw of them now, and the rest tomorrow.
=]

Rikki -- done.
Temps -- done.

Crap.

Did I do the wrong one? :s

Do I have to do both ?

If so, say :D I dont mind :)

xx

Noo. You don't have to do both. And you did the right one. I was just taking a break from finishing returning the comments. =]

Crap. I will get to the rest tomorrow after school. I slept all day today because I've been ill. But I'll do them. Promise!

Oh Bree. Don't stress yourself any more haha!

Sleep it off, and go to school :)

Don't worry about rushing !!

~* Perfection Takes Time *~

=]

Get well soon :)

xx

Khobo -- done. [Hopefully the comment wasn't too short. Just let me know if it doesn't suffice.]

Nicole -- done.

Shinobi -- I'll do yours shortly. :]

Thanks Breeee =]

I'll change it too btw.

And repost. :)

xx

Hey, this better?

Sixty-one you would be today,
Yes, Grandad, sixty-one.
My love for you is still strong;
And our bond never will come undone.

Sixty-one you would be today,
All those years which have gone by.
We would have sung you Happy Birthday;
Mouse, Kayla, Em, Nan, Mum, Dad and I.

Sixty-one you would be today,
Kisses and hugs you would have received.
Presents, calls and songs.
Sixty-one punches most definately guaranteed.

Sixty-one you would be today,
Yes, Grandad, it would have been so great.
Missing you every moment, Grandad;
Up there painting those Pearly White Gates.

I changed it a bit... like you suggested :) I like it this way too. :)

Thanks for that btw.

Wanna do another deal? 1 for 1?

Ill do 'A fighting chance' and Ill repost?

=]

xx

Sure thing.

Thanks. Is that one okay to do? I just noticed you submitted another.

- Considering alll possiblities :D

I could do both :)

2 for 2 haha :p

xx

It's up to you.

Haha.

You choose?

I'll do uhh.. A Fighting Chance.

And after dinner, the new one :) *forgot name '-.-

:)

Thanks a bunch! :)

I'll hop right to it :)

xx

Lol. Okayy.
=]

Done! :)

However, I put a few suggestions in there. I hope they make sense :D

Good luck with it :)

It was a great poem :)

I'm off to eat dinner :D

When you get around to it, "No One Can Mimic" is one I really need help on haha. No rush or anything :)

Thanks Bree!

Ttys

xx

Shinobi, done.

Nicole, done.

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