Beheading of Gravel Toes [[BrokenREALiTy.

One for two for the first three people. Everyone else after gets one for one (if I even get that many people O_O.)

Basic Rules:
`No one-liners, two-liners, three-liners, etc. Comments have to be insightful, helpful or both. I have to feel like you actually read it. If I don't get that feeling, I don't respond back.
****This is a piece that really won't make sense to a lot of people--I really want you to think about it. If you're not into symbolism or don't fancy arbitrary poetry, don't read it.
`If you don't rate, I don't rate. Get the picture?
`Please leave titles here. If you don't care, please state accordingly.

Thanks :)
..__MiNDYY

Done :D Great write hun :)

Please can you comment on my poem called Broken Glass :) xxxx thats all I ask for xxxx

Done =]

I don't care which pieces of mine you comment on.
Any which catch the eye would be appreicated.

Thanks.
-Mel

Done :)
Anybody else?

..__MiNDYY

Done :)

please comment/rate "Serpentine Kiss"

thanks

Done :)
Anybody else?

..__MiNDYY

Done, Zeenat :)

Anybody else?