One for Two...maybe threee your choice!

I just wrote a new poem called "Not Good Enough for Truth or Cliche"
If you could read it and comment I will do at least two of your poems.
The way I will do three is if you do the following:
-leave a detailed HELPFUL comment
-point out one thing that seems to be wrong or something I should work on.
-point out one thing I did well

If you do this i will comment three of your poems.

Please leave the poems you would like me to comment back otherwise I will not comment yours.

P.S. I will NOT respond to those one-three liners I leave detailed comments so I hope for the same! Oh and if my comments are helpful please praise them I will do the same to insightful comments : )

I'll do it. I don't like 1-3 liners either.

Umm Please do my latest one "Locked away" and "That Girl".

Thanks in advance. I'll go read yours right now.

Ok I'm done...That is a really great poem. I gave you my choices above. ^ thanks.

Done :)

Sure why not

Thine Heart Bleedeth