New Titled Contest

  • Jenni Marie
    15 years ago

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~RESULTS AT BOTTOM~~~~~~~~~~~~

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    I will have "Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me" and
    "The Closer I Get To You". Please and thank you!

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    15 years ago

    May I please reserve: "The closer I get to you" and "Will you still love me tomorrow?" Thank you!

    .:CiiNDY:.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me and Just the Lonely Talking Again please :)

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Will you Still love me tomorrow

  • Kurt
    15 years ago

    I'll take "Here's a quarter (call someone who cares)" Thank you.

  • Inside the Liar
    15 years ago

    Hey, I want to reserve "Falling Out Of Love With You." thanks. :)

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    It's not right but it's okay

  • Teria
    15 years ago

    It's not right but it's okay.

    Her heart beats silently
    but I hear it from yards away.
    Her voice cries quietly,
    whimpering as it screams.

    No one could bare the pain,
    nor the thought of losing her.
    And considering everything -
    it's not right but it's okay.

    We've been here before,
    she's captured the moments.
    Fearful of death,
    yet joyful for life -
    it's the time that counts
    and we mustn't waste it.

    She's made me smile,
    and sometimes cry.
    More so I laugh,
    that she makes me try.

    She's held us together
    and this could tear us apart.
    But, it's not in our hands
    and it's not right but it's okay.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    Just the Lonely Talking Again

    In the heat of the moment, you took my quivering hand,
    And together we ran through the bare city streets,
    Screaming at the top of our lungs, with gunpowder on our tongues:
    Three little bullets: "I love you" -- [Shh, listen..as our hearts beat].

    The sun swallowed us whole as we sank into the horizon,
    And the wind and birds were singing us softly to sleep,
    With your fingers running lightly through my golden hair,
    You hummed sweetly under your breath. [That song, I long to keep.]

    I held tightly onto you, afraid to blink and have you leave,
    And the clock was on our side, or so the story was told,
    But that feverish tick forced the time by too fast,
    Before I could open my eyes again, this news was old.

    My favorite color used to be red, like crimson roses,
    Until the day I watched your taillights disappear.
    And I swore up and down I wouldn't turn back again,
    But after-all, who's going to stop me? You're not here..

    Eyes bloodshot and hollow watched you go down in flames,
    While laughter echoed through my throbbing body,
    And I doused the fire between you and the road back home,
    But you weren't going to let me forget that easily.

    I stood before the sun, watching as it swallowed the clouds whole,
    And with a bittersweet smile, I turned to walk away,
    Hesitantly, I stayed to fire those three little bullets:
    "I love you.." [But maybe that's just the lonely talking again..]

    - Jenna.Elphick
    February 23, 2009

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Heartbreak Hotel please :)

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Heartbreak Hotel (it's not good, I warn you)

    Dragging my cases
    Through the revolving doors.
    It's a home from home
    At the Heartbreak Hotel.

    "Room for one",
    Mumbled towards the desk.
    Those familiar keys
    For Room 23 sparkle.

    Screaming at wallpaper
    Doesn't solve anything.
    Forget your troubles
    At the Heartbreak Hotel.

    Surely, he loved me?
    Husband-to-be?
    No. That son of a...
    He packed my bags for me!

    Tying my noose,
    Watched by my replacement,
    While I rip my heart out
    At the Heartbreak Hotel.

    Checking out as
    I can't stay any more.
    The hotel compliments
    Are beginning to haunt me.

    Goodbye, Room 23,
    For the last time.
    I won't be staying again
    At the Heartbreak Hotel.

  • Inside the Liar
    15 years ago

    Falling Out Of Love With You

    Lately when I look at you
    I can't help but still smile
    Remembering how you used to hold me close
    And make me feel worthwhile

    And when I think about the times
    When we were out together
    I know I never could have thought
    Of something that we couldn't weather

    But something has been changing lately
    Something I can't quite name
    Although the actions keep repeating
    The emotions just aren't the same

    And I just can't put my finger on it
    On what changed with time
    There were moments I used to marvel
    Because you were really mine

    And now I find myself making excuses
    For everything I am and feel
    Doubting and thinking and hating myself
    For wondering if our love is still real.

    We've been together for so long
    It's hard to imagine being apart
    My mind wants to still love you
    But it just isn't convincing my heart

    I'm sorry if I seem off lately babe
    I just don't know what to do
    Because for the first time in my life
    I'm falling out of love with you.

  • Mask of Pain
    15 years ago

    Yester-me, yester-you, yesterday PLZ AND THANK YOU!

  • Mask of Pain
    15 years ago

    Yester-me, yester-you, yesterday

    Yester-me, yester-you, yesterday.
    I remained yesterday , yester- us, you looked at me with love. You were my belove. Yester-me, yester-you, yesterday. You kissed me with a passion in a loving fashion. yester-me, yester-you, yesterday. You said you missed me and never would dis-me. yester-me, yester-you, yesterday . You said we need to talk you needed to be free like Tony hawk. yester-me, yester-you, yesterday. I cried, you just sat there trying not to hurt your pride. yester-me, yester-you, yesterday. I was a fool to be with you. Now it's just yester-me, yester-you, yesterday.

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Can I reserve It's not right, but it's okay please

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    It's Not Right, But It's Okay

    You tried to fix my heart before,
    and you will probably try again.
    Dear Lord, save me from this
    loser, love Emily, Amen.

    Giving me hell from the start,
    even threatening with a knife.
    Now chocolates, flowers, and what's this?
    A ring? Are you trying to end my life?

    So out came the super glue and the tape,
    sitting down with my broken heart.
    With that stupid look of concentration
    on your face, you healed me, part by part.

    Expecting to walk me home from work,
    you had brought along your gift.
    Tied up in a box with a ribbon,
    your shy smile made my spirits lift.

    Opening the lid, I saw my heart.
    I wasn't sure what I should say.
    Remembering our past, the monster you were,
    stuttering, "It's not right, b-but it's okay."

  • dollwithafrown
    15 years ago

    "Don't Go Away Mad {Just Go Away}", please.

  • dollwithafrown
    15 years ago

    Don't Go Away Mad {Just Go Away}
    by dollwithafrown.

    Your overbearing heart-ache has got too much for me,
    I'm sorry pretty baby, but I'm trying to let you see
    That the world isn't big enough for you and I plus three,
    My lungs aren't working anymore, it's too hard to breathe.

    I need some space and I need some time;
    Go back to a memory that I can call mine.
    And in the end we'll manage to climb
    That hill that we started before our decline.

    If you give me some freedom, I'll give you a chance
    To spread out your wings and learn how to dance,
    And together we'll sail through our story's last glance;
    A once broken but now blooming heartbreak romance.

    So go away baby, and swim with the sharks.
    Don't frown, sweetie; no sad remarks.
    We'll meet once again, down by the park,
    Where we lay on the grass to watch fireworks spark.

    Come back pretty and come back sweet;
    It's never too late for us to beat
    The thorn in our ribs that's made us incomplete,
    The love is still there, whole and concrete.

  • Krista
    15 years ago

    You Don't Love Me
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    Bruises, cuts, welts, pain,
    is that what you call love?
    Meaningless words flow
    from your angry mouth,
    into my helpless mind,
    absorbing every bit.

    We used to share something,
    now I'm afraid it's flown away.
    Kisses and hugs were special,
    now they are nonexistant.
    Afraid of alleys in the night,
    for you might be there waiting.

    You never really loved me,
    that's all I'll really say.
    Hoping for a loving future;
    white picket fence in grass,
    ice cream on the porch swing,
    but all that ended with a punch.

  • Lonely Rider
    15 years ago

    Will you still love me tomorrow?(Nove Otto)

    Years welcome with wrinkled embrace,
    blossoms have withered, shrinking grace,
    from destiny, smiles I borrow,
    and watch them shimmer in your eyes,
    moment enclosing for goodbyes,
    will your heart then drown in sorrow?
    Uncertainty clouds, dream sublime,
    with unceasing rhythm of time,
    Will you still love me tomorrow?

    **The Nove Otto poetry form was created by Scott J. Alcorn. It is a nine-lined poem with
    8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). The rhyme scheme is as follows: aacbbcddc.

  • ether
    15 years ago

    Falling Out of Love With You (Softly).

    I'm staring at my bedroom window,
    Watching the morning rays float through.
    Debating the warmth of glass and stone,
    Remembering days I waited just for you.

    We've seen the dust and flames,
    Dynamite fingers, staring wide,
    I watch you burn, melt and mold.
    Change that won't turn back with tide.

    You took my hand once more and smiled,
    We thought to change the frosted moon
    With lips that met with too much to say,
    Just wanting to feel love so smooth.

    Your jealousy and my passion
    With my gasoline insides, lit the skies,
    All too soon ran out of air.
    Brought upon us iron shoe-string ties.

    With apathetic urgency,
    Turned half the days to dark.
    Started the rains, turned the tides,
    I'm Noah with half an ark.

    Suits of ignorance change with fashion,
    And I feel I am lost between the art,
    Gave our all to some carbon black,
    Trying to neutralize my heart.

  • Kurt
    15 years ago

    Here's a Quarter (Call Someone Who Cares)

    Monotonous bodies meander on
    Draped in black Armani business attire
    Avariciously driven dusk till dawn
    Designer trends generate pseudo desire

    Oil running copiously through their blood
    Fueling the grotesque and bloated culture
    McDonald's stock soars while New Orleans floods
    Only inhabitants that remain are the vultures

    Citizens remaining slothful and naive
    Who fail to realize their limitations
    Making it not difficult to conceive
    Why there are so many complications

    Now banks are beginning to fail
    A country shakes upon its pedestal
    Reality no longer hides behind its veil
    And America's boasts must be recalled

    American businesses brought to their knees
    Sputtering and spattering "Sir, could you please?"
    Yet the foreigners speak their denial
    "But our economy lay in near despair"
    The stranger barely mustered a smile
    "Here's a quarter. Call someone who cares"

    © Kurt Hampton 2009

  • Poet on the Piano
    15 years ago

    Please is it possible to unreserve? I can not think of anything and am currently working on other pieces. Thank you anyway though, and I'm sorry

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    15 years ago

    Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me

    I could stay right here forever, lost in your eyes;
    If only I could rip the wings off these butterflies..

    Shuddering, I grasped your warm palm against mine,
    And as a shiver crept up and down my spine,
    I smiled, as our velvet fingers delicately entwined;
    [Hold me close to you, let me feel your heart beat.]

    On my neck, I could feel the rhythm of the song,
    When you leaned in and began to hum along,
    Twisting through the crowd, your eyes locked on me,
    You told me there was nowhere else you'd rather be.

    Under a full moon, in a blanket of crystal dew,
    I begged for just one thing: Wanting only you..
    In your eyes of Emerald, I seen a spark or two,
    [And I swear I felt them light our hearts on fire.]

    The sun dipped over the horizon, as we lay:
    Just you and I, praying the rest would go away,
    And in the early hour, you smiled over at me,
    Our shadows silhouetted on the tall oak tree.

    If I could get lost in this moment forever, I would;
    But I don't get half the things I think I should.

    -Jenna Elphick
    March 19, 2009

  • Jenni Marie
    15 years ago

    1st place: 8 in depth comments- Here's a Quarter (Call Someone Who Cares)~Afraid_Of_The _Dark~

    2nd place-6 in depth comments-Hold Me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me-HOLLYWOODxBANG BANG

    3rd place-4 indepth comments-Don't Go Away Mad {Just Go Away}KindlyUnspoken

    This was a really hard one to judge, you all did a great job!

    Please pm me the titles.

  • Inside the Liar
    15 years ago

    Congrats guys.

  • xToBeWithYoux
    15 years ago

    Congrats people! :)

  • dollwithafrown
    15 years ago

    Thank you for 3rd place. :)

    Congrats to everybody else.