3 for 1...again!

I have a new poem entitled "Unknown Tragedy" and I'm looking for some feedback. I tried something a little different than my usual style. I'll return the favor for up to 3 poems of your choosing.

I always put as much into my comments as you put into yours. Thanks in advance! :]

-Rolo

Okayy , please do The X-Ray and what ever else catches your eye , thanks :) .

Ok done please do any that have no comments on them thank you!!

Good job. Could you please comment on my lyrics "The Monsters Are Due Out on Maple Street Tonight" "Sticks and Stones" and "Wishful Thinking" Thank you.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

As requested, peruse mine and see if any may catch your eye or mind.

Can you do my lastest ones

Please comment
"Stung by a scorpion"
"Moment of affinity" and
"A look can convey so much"

i will comment yours right now!!

Done. amazing job!
can you do
"Daydreaming Memories About Him"
"Waiting in That Shadows, Until The Sun Hits Me To SHine"
"I'm Yours"
Grachias In Advance =]

Done, any that you like is fine with me. Thanks Shanik

Done.

- Unsought Lust
- And any other from my featured

Thanks. (:

Thank you all so much, I promise I'll get to all of your poems as soon as I have a chance!! School is kickin my ass right now!

-Rolo

Done.

Please review either my latest three or any of your choosing.