i'll read, rate, and comment ur poems . . .

All I ask is that you do the same for me and I will read rate, and comment urs. thank you I appreciate it.

that sound groovy to me, lol. im polly, so browse through my poems if you will, and comment, and i will be reading ur poems right about now for ya.
thanks.
polly
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Sure I will, can you please check out the poem 'Happy Birthday' Its for my friend and I want to get it just right so I would really like to know ways to improve it and what you think
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your poems were really great anybody else need comments just let me know and please comment mine too.

these poems have all been great does anybody else want me 2 comment theres