Will somebody comment on my poems... I need advice!

- Name : Vicious Tragedy â„¢
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Vicious Tragedy â„¢
20 years ago

I don't think some of my poems have the right.... beat we'll say... can anyone help me. Please leave comments! ^_^

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- Name : Vicious Tragedy â„¢
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Jan 3, 2005
- Posts : 144
Vicious Tragedy â„¢
20 years ago

thank you

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- Name : TrUtH hUrTs
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TrUtH hUrTs
20 years ago

ok i will could u pretty plz do the same for my poem lost love ...really want suggestions/feedback on it...

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