i have a new poem!!!!

my new poem is called "that's what makes me sad", if you can please rate and comment it i would really appreicate it, ill comment yours to if you want me to, thank you

can u plz read and vote,comment or suggest about my poem 214 I will really appreciate it thanks!!!=)

k i looked at ur and it was good, anyone else want me to comment theirs, and if you could comment mine i would really appreicate it, thanx