My Poems are good? Or not?

I need comments and votes, not just one or the other, if possible. I want to get better!

And could you focus on the ones that haven't gotten votes or reviews? I mainly need feedback on them. Thanks!

Sure thing. Could you possibly read my recent poem called The Hospital? I'd appreciate it!

not a problem... please read my new ones " now he's gone: and "raising my white flag" if possible
luv janice
xoxox

Holy crud! I just realized that I've been commenting, but not voting! I thought it included your vote when it said "add comment"... I'll start doing that.

Bump, I need more votes, I have too many poems! :P

Ok done. Could you check mine also I want comment on my new poem titled My Story thanks!!! =)