IM BEGGING ... please comment

  • Janice Brown~©~
    20 years ago

    please comment on my poem "now that he's gone"
    i would really appreciate it becoz it comes from the heart and i need to get back into writing down my feelings so any critisisms would be very helpful

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  • Marta
    20 years ago

    Sure I'll read it. Could you read one of my recent ones, The Hospital? Thanks :)

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