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Name : BlueEyedMystery
Status : Senior Member
Joined : Apr 28, 2006
Posts : 1744

Hi. :)

I used to write all the time, but then I guess I just lost my inspiration. So this is my first poem I've written in a while. I'd be verrry happy if you could comment on it.

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If you're in need of some comments, just post the titles below, and I'll get to them as soon as I can. =]

- Name : LoreNz0
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LoreNz0
14 years ago

I wouldnt mind some feedback on, "you and me" and "my inspiration" or anything u wanna comment on. ill have a butchers of some of urs. =)

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- Name : BlueEyedMystery
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BlueEyedMystery
14 years ago

Done. =]

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- Name : Karl Wild GG23
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Karl Wild GG23
14 years ago

Great Job! Please do "Eternal Love"

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- Name : BlueEyedMystery
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- Posts : 1744
BlueEyedMystery
14 years ago

Done. :]

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- Name : BlueEyedMystery
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Apr 28, 2006
- Posts : 1744
BlueEyedMystery
14 years ago

Done. :] Sorry about that. Haha. Lovely poem. One of your other poems caught my eye also. "I Just Hate You, April." I'm definitely going to go back and read that one later!

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- Name : Britt
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Britt
14 years ago

Done :) Please do "Cloudless"

Thank you!

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- Name : BlueEyedMystery
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- Joined : Apr 28, 2006
- Posts : 1744
BlueEyedMystery
14 years ago

Done. :] Great poem!

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