Wanna Help?

I wrote this poem, but i cant think of a good enough ending. Does anyone have advise?

Fades to Black
Her life was simple no pain at all
A year went by, she soon started to fall
The bright colors of pink soon faded to black
For something called love was what she lacked
Mommy and Daddy could not help
Because of them this is how she felt

I wrote some other paragraphs but i dont know which one to put first...

They had no idea what was going on
They thought she had a perfect world
But you see they thought wrong
She knew the pain would soon get worse
Life to her was just a curse...

And then...

With no where to go
And no where to hide
She made a disicon
That would soon change her life

Well what do you think?
Amberlee

I think u should leave it in the order u have it in..u seem to be doing fine with it.