New Member Here - Please Read and Rate My Only Poem. I Would Lov

Hi people,

My name is Firdaus Fanny Putera Perdana, but you can simply call me F2P2. Fido, Ferdy, Firdy or Fridus are okay to me. I only have one poem on my list and would love to hear your opinions, criticisms and suggestions for that. It would be very appreciated and I would love to return the favor. Just tell me one poem and wholeheartedly I would read it. Thanks in advance.

Best Regards,
F2P2

This poem is a delicious blend of loving metaphors in a heartfelt expression of desire, and I will put it in your comment box if the server will allow me to remain logged in when I click on a poem

I ma done with your delicious yet love-filled poem...:)
could you please r/r/c my poem "Loosely strapped onto your fate" and "cheer up"
Thank you...:)