i'm new help me please

please tell me how i could improve the poems i've written

hunni i have read your stuff already and i think that you are an amazing writer! you are already under favorites and i only have about 4 favorites..the only way to improve is to practice..but i am not sure you could get any better because you are already really good!
well if you ever need an opinion, vote, or comment.. i am here!:)

love
~shannon~