I'm new to this and i want to know what u think. Will respond ba

I just found this site thanks to my gurlfriend who is my inspiration. I write all my poems for her, she's my life. Other then now she has been the only one to read any of them, she always told me she loved them but I wanted some feedback from some1 who don't know me. I promise if you read any of my poems I will read and comment on yours. Thank you so much

Good work hun... keep it up...