My poem "series"

I have this poem series on here that I call The Stranger series. They are the only poems that I have featured. Can someone please read them and comment on them??? they are my pride and joy :-D THANK YOU!!!

Hmmm since it is a series, then I ask of you one thing: read mine and I will read yours.

Mine is pretty much one looooooong poem broken up into... 7 parts I think. They're called "The End".

If you agree to read mine and give constructive criticism then we have a deal :)

[boy do I sound mean]