I dont have a catchy title

ok people i am putting myself out there... i really want people to read my poems and pick them apart, tell me what you liked about them what you didnt... explain why you did or why you didnt i really want to improve my writing skills and one way is through your comments on my poems. i want you to be completly honest you wont hurt my feelings if you tell me you didnt like my poem if you explain why. i want to know if you like the rhyme scheme ( most are the same but i have tried to use some different ones) i want you to tell me if you like the rhythem on the poem i want you im putting myself out there for your help please help me... i will try to do the same for yours. thank you.

uhm, ill look at quite a few myself, but you may have better luck getting people to help ya out if you list a few you would like them to read.. you have quite a large number (well enough for me not to know where to start.. haha)

just a suggestion

~chris

sure, i'll check out some of your poems, and i'll be perfectly honest, so if i say the poem is good then it is. yes, if you suggeted some poems to read, it would be easier.

~SatuzKa~

yea i forgot that i had alot... here a sum that i would really like people to pick a couple from and tell me what they think... "The same class", "Let me be", "Darkness cry". "Crimsom tears", "Sterotypes," " Related strangers," " Blind faith," "Lessons taught unaware", "Grandaddy." and "Moment of Weakness" please people. thank you.

If u would check out some of mine and give me ur thoughts that would be great. I have read ur and u have done an exellent job!

Thanx Kia for ur thoughts I need all the help I can get! I haven't been doing this long so thanx!

I'd be happy to check out some of your poems.

im not offended that's what i asked for... thank you for your honesty... i will have to look at the poems and review them and see if i cant revise them. thanks though.