Would love some other female points of view on this....

I just finished what turned out to be BY FAR, the most elaborate way I've ever tried to score a date with a girl I liked. I would adore any other female points of view on this and tell me if I nailed it good or not. Please and ty. I don't mind returning the favor 1 for 1.

The poems is my most recently written and is rightly named just like it is mentioned above. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE for your time and comments.

Will look into the write!