Throat Choked Muscles Tensed (Comment?)

Comment on mine and I'll comment on yours. I'd just like to see how people react to mine because when I wrote it, which was maybe a year ago, I really wrote it out by hand at like 90wpm so I looked at it again and typed it out on here. It makes sense to me because I wrote it but I'd just like to see how it affects others. Thanks and if you comment on mine I'll check out yours.

heyy i commented

I will comment on ur poem!