By The By

Hey everyone, i haven't posted in a while. This isn't a request for a new poem, but it is for the last one posted. I haven't got much feedback on my poem "by the by" and one of those comments was just informing me the reader didn't understand it. So could anyone take a look at it, i admit it isn't the easiest of poem to understand but i'd like a little feedback. Thanks.

I'll return the favour asap.

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I just read ur poem and commented please get back with me and let me know if I understand what u were saying! In the UK the words can have different meanings but I think I was on the right track! Not sure could be way off! Thanx!

I hope we will hear back from u soon!

Hey Brooke thanks for the comment, i've sent you a private message with the meaning and i have also added it to the bottom of the poem for those who also want to know the meaning. Either way congratulations, you got it right!! Thanks for reading and commenting, it means a lot.
Take care,
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