So...A Quickie? Anyone? (Voting)

  • Everlasting
    3 years ago

    Hello, thank you to those who submitted a poem. Now, please everyone help me out by Pming me the poem that is your favorite. I’ll post the results on Monday.

    Here are the poems I received :

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    Poem #1

    When we are alone together,
    worldly wonders weep.
    How painfully beautiful
    our love could have been
    if we had harvested happiness
    instead of adorning asinine anger.
    We are now the walking dead,
    and in the dark light of eternity,
    the sweet sorrow of starry shadows
    will never let us come home.
    The Earth eliminates elucidating
    emotion; we are nothing but
    sedated, superficial stardust.

    ——

    Poem #2 Jeremiah

    A pillar of the community
    his faith kept him true
    while his unfaithfulness
    made him falsely true
    in the eyes of his wife and lover.

    ———

    Poem #3

    succinctly spoken, she seems sure
    in her soft scorn. scrutinizing her
    scruples as subtle as it was seemed
    silly at first, but October’s dark light
    reminds you of the walking dead
    that will soon shower the streets
    with dread. you're reminded of
    the vibrant dullness of trees,
    the brightness of the night sky,
    the hope behind the gloom
    of her cackle. she sports a
    sweeper and soars
    into the sky.

    ——

    Poem #4 Her Continuous Extinction

    Catered emotions
    cascade
    into a clean canvas,
    while she
    tries to paint
    herself the perfect
    portrait

    under a
    melancholy Moon
    that contained
    his light.

    Phantoms float freely
    seeking shadows
    that shed darkness
    to show off
    their hidden sheen,

    among their
    crowd,
    she shares
    sips of cold water
    with passing by
    strangers.

    She sisters
    dim stars,
    and befriends
    languid
    loneliness.

    She’s
    just
    a
    homeless
    soul
    in
    Utopia.

  • Everlasting
    3 years ago

    I have two votes so far. Keep the votes coming guys.

    so far I have a tie.

  • Everlasting
    3 years ago

    I have one more vote. Please keep the votes on coming.