ONLY IF YOU WANNA IMPROVE AS A WRITER

okk read

lost love
catharsis
broken

Alright.. read my newest ones The Things You Do Today, For You, and Nothing....
Thanks a lot!

Hey could you take a look at mine please, I always look for honesty and critique.
Thanks.

ok read glommy and being forgotten
be honest and i'll be honest with your poems~!!~

Any of mine, critique is really welcome

Could you please read "The Meeting Place"? Thanks!

If you have the time, then it would be highly appreciated if you could also look at any of mines.

If you could check out both of my Metaphorical Murder poems that would be nice.

look i do agree wid u about the poem u found corny but other than that stop telling me to revise my stuff!! ur entitled to ur opinion and i will welcome ur critique but i happen to not like rhyme schemes too much and like to keep lines broken up..so plz...read my poems gimme ur opinion i'll keep em in mind the NEXT time im writing

Could you please take a look at my poem little sister...Xox Sherrie

Hi pal..
Id admire your writings,
Id appreciate alot if u could
comment mine. "enclose of you"