Take Advantage Of Me

I would love if you read some of my poems, I dont know if they are any good, so it would be amazing if you could comment.
Thank you very much

*Unfrgiven pleasure
*Fading Away
*Thanks for nothing

hey if you can read
questions of doubt
dying in decay
my friend
lastly...flamming fire,and desire

thanx alot
i like to know what other people think about my poems******

Sorry, I change the title to "Becoming a Ghost" please, if you have the chance read it

can you please read any of my featured poems especially the aids of africa tho :D

if you want any poems reading let me know

thanx
Jacs
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