Want honest comments?...

... if not, I suggest you leave this thread right now. I am in a happy mood (no more school for three weeks!) so anyone who wants a few comments then here's your chance!
Conditions:
1. Please tell me which poems you want commented on. No more than three per person please (I don't have ALL the time in the world)
2. I will be honest- I am not a good critique but if I don't like something about your poem... I will tell you. Please don't take offense- and if you do not like knowing faults in your poetry, do not leave a title.
3. I would prefer reading poems with originality.

I am ready and waiting to get commenting!

Ok, I just did and I left my comments... well done on both of them. Despite what my comments said, I did enjoy reading them.

Anyone else?

Hey, thank you very much... I really need an honest opinion. Here are what I think are my best poems:

*Fading Away
*Unforgiven pleasure

Thanks

Erika: you have an immense talent. I loved the work of yours I read, and I think I will go back and read another poem by you, they were of a high standard. Well done.

Sarah: also well done. I left my comments on the poems you asked. Keep writing, and keep developing literary skills.

Anyone else?

Oh... that's sad that it's true then. I'd be scared if a guy was stalking me. I just thoguht the concept of it was a lot more darker... that's why I said that. Well, don't pay heed to my comments, they are worth little to your own feelings and self-advice :-).

Thank you soooo much for your comments, you have no idea what they mean to me, especially comming form you, you have a very peculiar style, dont ever change it. Once more, thanks

Mystic Thoughts: I will check out play in my blood and bloody tears now... I've already read your poem 'emotional suicide' today :-P and it was very good.

Done. Very nice poems- I have left my comment on both of them.

Anyone else? Please also specify if you do not care about any harsh critiques I could give. I'm not sure if my warning would be understood by all.

can you please check out my poem "Gemini" and my poem "Crossroads" thanks so much...B.T.W i read a couple of your poems, nicely written!!

Done! "Crossfades" was extremely emotional... very nice story line.

Any others?

could you read tears of a fallen angel and maybe another?

thank you

done. I hope you take my comments in with a good heart- they are meant to be helpful.

I am still ready to read.

Please check out my poems:

"My dad: dead and gone forever"
"Blood on my bathroom floor"
"A place called heaven"

Thanks =)

Yes please...
the first cut is the deepest
we should count our blessings
feelings

many thanks Doreen

Sad Eyes (Kitty): I've read all three... and thankyou for the offer of repaying the favour, but you don't have to :-)

September Spring: I had already read one of those poems yesterday :P so I only read and commented on the other two...

Doreen: just finished reading the three of them
:-)