Can anyone finish this one??? You'll do better than me, that's f

I am so not able to write poetry just now, but still I thought of a something, and decided to write a few lines, but sadly, they suck, and I don't want to finish them, as I only get more and more unsatisfied with every line I write..

So here it is:

I`ve decided to surrender now,
to at last give up the fight.
I do not know if its good for me,
nor if it is wrong or right

I hereby lose myself in you
for better or for worse.
It may very well be then of me,
yet in you I will immerse.

You know, I'm your`s forever now,
so please take care of my soul,
and my heart I lay to rest in you,
the one that once you stole.

Can you continue it? Please?

If you are good, then I'll certainly read your poems=)

The first virse is good the other two need a little work. sorry Im not abel to help you out.

I`ve decided to surrender now,
to at last give up the fight.
I don't know if its good for me,
nor if it is wrong or right

I hereby lose myself in you
for better or for worse.
I make this vow so you can see
in you I will immerse.

You know, I'm your`s forever now,
so please take care of my soul,
my heart I lay to rest in you,
the one that once you stole.

So as I give myself to you
and you give yourself to me
the golen bands of trust (love) exchanged
and kept for eternity

hope this helps....hope i managed to finish it off for u! take care
xxxLoUxxx