I'll comment on your poems!

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    If you would like someone to comment HONESTLY on your poems I will. If you could please tell me the names of up to 3 of your poems I will read them, if I like your writing I will read more. If you could also please check out my new, I guess you would call it "Prose Poetry", poem called "Mirror" I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks so much!

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    I dont care which three u read...but i would love some real good comments, i'm sick of that suck up crap. but yeah. i think i only have three featured poems, if not, then any three of my featured poems would be nice.

  • Samantha
    20 years ago

    I don't care if you only read one poem..lol...But really, all my poems are equals except for the "Avalanche" trio...they're not so great ('cept maybe Pt. 1...anyway)

    I'm just looking for truthful (that's the keyword) critiques.

    Thanks.

  • **Just Her**
    20 years ago

    Beautiful Sadness
    Forever And Always
    Once Upon A Time

    thanks sooo much... im going to read ur poem right now:)

  • bryan
    20 years ago

    heyy can ya comment on mine...

    just missed
    beautiful disaster
    my life, why

  • Misstress
    20 years ago

    Dear Father
    Coffee Table
    Not A Song

    I'll go check your works...got all day to read.
    ;-)
    Thanks...

  • Robert
    20 years ago

    Ok here it goes enjoy please read
    Knock, Knock
    I stand Here
    Medusa
    thanx and will be watching you....

  • Ria
    20 years ago

    I always hear about those honest comments..I don't understand.Why should someone write a comment he/she doesn't mean??When I don't like a poem that much, I simply don't write a comment...anyway,I would really like to see how you comment:P (My purpose wasn't to insult anybody I just need an explanation here)

    It would be great if you could read "The lie" "My final fall" and "Lost count" I think they are the best I've ever written...

    *Hugs*

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    anyone else?

  • Courtney Lynn
    20 years ago

    Yea me will you rate and comment my poetry?
    read...
    Why
    Hush
    Why did you do this to me Pt.1

  • shannon
    20 years ago

    can you please read "that february morning"

    thanks i will commetn on yours

  • Matthew
    20 years ago

    Yeah i'll check it out.

    Good Sex/Bad Sex
    The Kiss
    Foreplay:Third Edition

    You can read the other two Foreplay's. They run togther.

  • The Angel of Secrets
    20 years ago

    Please read my poems: I loved and I lost, The skies would get black, 8 rules.