i need some help

i have three poems on this site. they're called: Never Heal, Demons, and Cut.Bleed.Burn.Faint. i need some help to improve, and it would mean a lot to me if you all could rate and comment on my poetry.

Have commented honey and I hope you learn to fight your demons. Take care Love Rach xx

Sure I will read! Would you check out a couple of my newest ones! Thanx!