Starving Poets

Hey there. Sean Allen, Lance Hardy, and I wrote a poem together that we would love some feedback on. I know we havn't written in a while but this is our comeback i suppose. So yeah, any comments/constructive criticism would be great.

Thanks,

Aken Sol

Ok will do but could comment and vote on

Burn
Evil For Evil
Human Disease

plz vote an comment on mine! if you do i will comment on yours!