I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR ASAP...

alfalfa!!! dont ask!!! ok il do it!!!

ok i am going to read some now if you can do the same for me be as harsh as possible i dont care if you say flat out your poems suck i want the truth

Hey....I have commented on two of your poems and they are really great. Please comment on:

My pain remains inside
Beautiful...
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Thank you in advance...