tips and Criticism please

I would really appreciate it if some people would read some of my poems and give me some tips and/or ways i can improve my writing style, i never seem to get many comments with recommendations on how i can improve..
thanks alot (if you want i'll return the favor)

yea sure i will comment honestly....plz return the favor :D

I will if you will. I'm new here and an up and coming poet so It would help me as well. So check my stuff out!!!! Thanx

Ok heres the ticket pal 3 for 3 will comment and vote on 3 of your poems hoping you would do the honors of commenting on my work. here are the titles. Thanx

Wind
The True Light
The Protector Of The Two Towers

please read my poem "colors of love" and comment....I also need some helpful hints =)

thanks

--christa//no motiv?