Just vent...

What I mean is that... whatever you are feeling right now no matter how fluffy, dark, or even vulgar you may be at the moment. Try to express it lyrically like in a song, or if you want to rap you can do that too, so in all just let go and vent out. I'll start

Rap

I see my face in the mirror (dis-sapointed aggainn)
I lived to see another day (when are my days gonna eeendd?)
tryin to come to words of realization
that what I been yearning for
may never come to end my frustration.
And all my degradation can never cease to pretend
That maybe one day all this pain may come to an end
(And yet) fate seems to rattle me
cought me in a storm of my own morbid fatalities
so here I layyy, listenin to another rappers melody
all sick and beat up, while my mp3 player got the remedy
A home grown punk, from a very strict family
never thought that he would make such a (calamity)
he's so haphazardly, and so crazy that would he
bring a revlover so close to his brain after downing a bottle of remy.
All he is wants is just one moment of clarity
so he could soak in all moment he could bear, just barely
But, all the ones he loved are long ggoonne
so hes sitin here tryin to write this damn sssoonngg.
hes the one in the back, thats been waiting so lloonngg
to find his release, but all he found was the boonngg.
Now he so lost in his purple haze
that time seems to drag on, day after day
his life, his world its all in dismay
And no one around wont let him borrow a couple rays
Of sunlight, so that he could see the sky
but no one wants to help so he's waitin for his turn to die
So alone that no ones gonna cry
when I get sent six feet deep no ones gonna try
to remember, the one in the back of the class
his headphones on with a pencil and a pad
his atmosphere, another ten letter word
discretion is the name of my cement feathered bird
He listens to slug, encasing his every word
The sickness in his voice, and rhymes that he cured
He focuses on his flow, and reads between the lines
all the sorrow he carries will end in due time
but not enough to say all of his goodbyes
So all he does, is cover his face up with lies
"I know I'm gonna make it, I just have to try!"
yea right... So all I have to say
we are all gathered here to bury
the one called Jay.

Thanks, try it everyone. I might submit my last post as a poem, it looks alright.

before I vent...I must say, Bravo man, bravo.
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why do you let him control you
everything he screams you take
every punch he makes
you blame yourself for his mistakes

fuck him, and fuck you too
you let him get the best of you
then he turns around and rips it to shreds
my respect for you has turned into dread

I dread the day he takes your life away
I can sense it coming as I lay
awake in my room, bleeding, those memories
feeding on my depression.

damn him, for when I stand up
he pushes me back down
he's pressed his luck
the bastards got what's coming for him.

Exactly what I'm talking about. If you have aggression, sadness or whatever butting heads inside, its best you let it out. I'm just tryin to point it in this direction.

nice.

reconizing and losing focus at the same time
trying to reiterate while my feeling feel sublime
understanding and hoping try to sew up my time
that was leaked from my oblivion of my miscellaneous crimes
I have yet to find
what the hell Im searchin for
trying to be happy
when my life hit the floor
I still try to hide my all my disastrous dreams and deeds
like sins of the flesh or my homicidal tendancies
let it be, I can't see, what the hell, I grown to be
and everything I valued I set aside to try to become, what I yearn to be.
Another scribble here and there and pages thrown away
I still strive to become, as my hair turns to gray.
so now here I lay
starin at the ceiling
dreaming of my atonement
and reminscing of my dealings
Of my dealt hand, and the lives I was stealing
paid most of my dues, and literally made a killing
So now here I stand (wishing for redemption)
For all the shit I did (and the things I can't mention)
Thank you to all the people that prayed for me
I will solemly swear I will hold on to my ugly
So I still standing here for somthing to hit me
Becasue all I want is for someone to forgive me.

I'm Feelin' It :) xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

You go off telling me this and that
Why do you do the things that you do
Telling me lies, you hide your eyes
But I can see right through you
Get out of my face
Get up, shut up, get lost -- don't wanna see you
You better leave this place
Cause I'm just sick of you...
Get up, shut up, get lost -- don't wanna see you
Get up, shut up, get lost -- don't wanna see you

(this is part of a song i and my band wrote)