Just to Write Poems or Raps

  • ~TornBecauseOfYou~
    20 years ago

    I sit here alone,
    waiten for the phone,
    for u to come home,
    i feel like a drone,
    when i found out i was like a clone,
    u chose another guy,
    even tho u kno hes a lie,
    but u think ima sit and cry,
    just let it go and say bye,
    i wont,
    so dont,
    tell me,
    wat to be,
    and see,
    that wit him u r free,
    when u were free,
    wit me,
    so dont give me that B,
    That bull shit,
    im done wit it,
    u kno your only wit him for the fame,
    and in the end whos gonna be in shame,
    i knew it the first day he came,
    Knoin hes Lame,
    and said he loves you,
    it aint true,
    u should of noticed the number he passed thro,
    to the other girl
    u kno to me u were my world,
    So im toughin up,
    tell u to wipe it up
    Take the Tears,
    and ure fears,
    and be prepared,
    go ahead and get scared,
    my love couldnt be compared,
    so be ready,
    for him to steadily
    break ure heart,
    take it apart,
    and then your gonna wonder y,
    and start to cry,
    even tho i said it was lie,
    and probly try,
    to back wit me,
    but u see,
    we are no more,
    ure out the door,
    u lost the chance,
    so just go dance,
    wit ure lien man,
    thinkin he can,
    be the one for u,
    so were thro.

    Ahhh, not really my best but hey, its alrite

  • The Poetic Child
    20 years ago

    Well there not really my poems, its just like, kinda like the Rap Battle, thing a place to write some Rhymes u could say

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    1) you suck in english...

    or

    2)you write like a kid in purpose...

    either way, I won't read it

  • ~TornBecauseOfYou~
    20 years ago

    If you won't read it then theres no need wasting your time telling me this, this is just how i type if you want to judge me by my typing go ahead i will live.....

  • The Poetic Child
    20 years ago

    See Thank u Taylor thats if u were goin to tell me that, how i would like it, Hey its Kinda hard to read, u think u can change it up a bit, not by sayin, 1) u suck in english or whatever, its called having Respect....

  • The Poetic Child
    20 years ago

    This is David Also, just if u didnt know

  • The Poetic Child
    20 years ago

    Cuz My friend got one just to write some comments on a forum, and then he gave it to me, so all my latest poems are in that account now