A Double Sacrifice For Love

I wrote a poem ^...It has four parts. All I ask is to read the first part of 'A Double Sacrifice For Love', and to comment on it so I know what you think. I would really appreciate it...Post your poems here so I can return the favor. If you read all parts, give me 5 poems to read. xxx Thank you. xxx

mk starting now...you can read any of mine that you havent read, its not a big deal. thanks though!!

Thank you! xxx